Lynn Sr. also tried to say something, but he couldn't either. And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. Lincoln: I said NO! "EXCUSE ME???!!!" Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. Submit your writing. Reacting to The Loud House (Fanfic) - TV Tropes No more Loud Family? Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. INT-LOUD HOUSE-LINCOLN'S ROOM (Lincoln and Lucy have just finished reading the new homemade comic that she made for him.) "What we're saying is is that you two are going to be confided to this building for the next 2 calendar cycles, only to leave for employment reasons or to get us sustenance from the one of our beloved stores." "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point. We don't need to get violent here. See if I care! I hate that you put your own lame pride and wants above everything else! Lincoln: Lucy! (closes the door to the room) Lincoln: Okay then. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. Luna: Bro, why you so upset? My own family, locking me out. Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! Lincoln: (points to the window) "The window. Journal. A Happy Ending New Reading List. "I'm not sure," Felix responded with, "I've got two groups of people saying they have one of our hotel rooms at the same time. While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!! I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. It's my first ever one shot I've done. The Loud House Fanfiction: No Such Luck PM1's Version Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. Lori: No, this is literally a terrible beach trip and I want to go home! ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! Loud House - FierceSquid276 - Wattpad You never let me have a say in the matter! And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. "Yeah Felix," she said, concerned hearing the pain in his voice, "What's wrong?" And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. Lucy: Gasp! Rita asked. Now we've broken the shower." Yes." nickelodeon nosuchluck theloudhouse # 11 The Black Cat's Curse by 890 7 4 And you better start talking now!". (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! In order for him to not have "bad luck", his sisters forced him to wear a squirrel suit from Lynn's baseball game. We know you are!". How can I help you?" "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! (sniffles) I'd better make a home fast. "Not cool, guys." The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. He briefly looks at the family photo, beginning to cry. "SAVE IT, RITA!" Lincoln: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She whistles for Fangs. He's a big fan of you, Lincoln; and he told me that you're working with news. Well just grin and bear it. Even you Lisa! I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! Trying explaining that!" Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! Lola: How could he?! Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. I have just had it! Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? I don't want this stupid bunch of brats in my life anymore! Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. "Although," Lana, a six-year old tomboy wearing a baseball, added, "if it helps we tried to fix it." (Both glare at each other) First you threaten me with your lousy pop stick of a baseball bat to make me come to a disgusting game thats nothing but a waste of time, than you blame me for your loss, than you help ruin my life, than youre too stupid to listen to my confession and admit that you were wrong and than at another stupid game you dont even make it up to me and you make me into some silly object! (With his remaining strength, he scrambles over to the house. "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck - DeviantArt "So," Lori started with, in an icy tone, "Let's recall what we promised you when you agreed to take us on vacation." Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. I loved it. I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. Takes place in the middle of the events of the infamous episode No Such Luck. I WISH YOU'D NEVER EXISTED!!!!! Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. How can I help you?" Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. User blog:AlexKawa/Alternative Ending: No Such Luck | The Loud House "YOU HEARD HER!" After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. ], Baseball Announcer: "It's goingit's goingIT'S GONE!!! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. But right now, ive had it! She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. Tell the community what's on your mind. The Loud House (My Version) - Season 2 by LuisLoudestFan on DeviantArt Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. ", Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! You tricked us in the first place. I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. After she said, water came rushing out of the bathroom, ruining the carpet and drenching their footwear in water. What seems to be the problem?" But seriously, we made a mess of everything! ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. She shouted that last part at the top of her lungs. Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! Especially Lynn. Nobody wanted to answer, but they knew things would get uglier if they didn't, so, Luna made the decision to walk slowly to the door and open it just enough to see who's out there but not to let them in. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. My first story is done. Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). So expect a bill in the mail." We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." Just so you know, in case you ask about that). Experimental One Shot. Not you or Lucy. He then grabs one of the sofa cushions and screams all his frustration into it.). Post a journal. she responded back with, in a bit of an uninterested tone. Lana said, glaring at her parents. Lynn: Well, its because of that costume that i won my last game! ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. Lincoln: Alright then, call them. I MESSED UP!!! "Good riddance." NOTHING!! Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. I hate concerts! I'm the Duke! "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will.